Alexander May Parks « Thread Started on Oct 7, 2006, 5:38pm »
Hello I am new here hehehehehe um....may I join? also would someone help me mybe?
Name:Alexander May Parks Title:Bringer Of Death Age:14 Gender:Female Race:Homuncli/ Serpent Weapons:None Personality:Kind-hearted,stunnborn, and Lonely History/Biography:Alexander was a sweet kind hearted girl she can be stunnborn at times as well. To everyone she was also known as a tomboy cause ofthe way she dressed. She never hated anyone until the day she died she was killed in a gun fire and was shot in the chest and died and was buried up near central for some reason and soon here grave was buried up and is soon found out to be a homuncli. No one knows who revived her but now she is with the other humoncli helping them wit there evil deeds. Yet Alexander shows only sadness and only wants to be human again and live in peace once more. There is a side to Alexander that she can not control once she tastes blood she will go crazy and kill anything she can get her hands on no one has ever stoped her becasue well no one has ever tried too help her. Also Alexander's dna was somehow mixed with dna of a serpent and so has the ability of a snake. Human Apperence: http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m4/SamuraiDeeperKyo_01/NinjaGirl2.jpg Homuncli Apperence:
And here is my military profile.
Name:Alexander May Parks NickName:Alex Title: The Earth Alchemist Alchemy:Earth Age:14 Gender:Female Rank:Major, State Alchemist Weapons:None History/Biography: Alexander is a military soilder but is a major also know as a state alchemist she is very smart,talented, and skilled she is sometimes stunnborn but follows direcions and rule. She uses Earth alchemy only she can not do any other kidn of alchemy she can do it with both hands or without both or clapign them and ect. Alexander does nto have any home and so the military took her in and trained her until she was strong enought to be i nthe military and ect. Apperence:
Joined: May 2006 Gender: Female Posts: 123 Location: Love ya, Liryc! Karma: 3,463,438
Re: Alexander May Parks « Reply #1 on Oct 9, 2006, 9:04pm »
All righty... Well, I have to say that I am glad someone is actually HERE to join us... We haven't had activity in ages, as you can see...
Now, for your character, for the most part, I have no complaints. One thing: she cannot be a homunculus because there are only seven Sin homunculi and seven Virtue homunculi. I suppose I could make room for her in the Virtue spot, as most of the people playing them have gone. Mind you, the coice you have between them will be very limited, but just because she's a Virtue doesn't mean she only has to do good things.^^ Most of them work with the Sin homunculi anyway. I must ask that you use the spellcheck on your posts, though, because there are too many typos and misspellings. Many of your sentances are unnecessarily long, and you could put a period in there to make it a little more fluent... Watch your punctuation, all right?
I DO like the character herself, and I WOULD like to see you RP here, so I'm sorry if I sound picky about the way your posts are to be written, but I can't help it. It's the rules, after all. ^^
Re: Alexander May Parks « Reply #2 on Sept 2, 2009, 9:58pm »
Have a look, very good, pass by... A friend in need is a friend indeed.A straight foot is not afraid of a crooked shoe.Care and diligence bring luck.Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.